Oscar, the Human Clone

This was an assignment that we got for our creative writting class. We had to write a little short story from a point of view of an unique character. Any comments/compliments would be appericiated to make this a bit better, thank you.
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It is close to the dawn and I'm standing at the edge of the roof by a white marble statue of an angel. The angel appears to be on his knees looking down, wings closed together, and face covered with a hood where only the eyes are showing; it stood five stories high. …