1. The Declaration of Independence
Inherent was changed to certain, so that not all rights would be in there but just certain ones. Unremitting is now repeated, a constant behavior is not the same as repeated. Repeated is more mild. They also took out some of Jefferson's own personal feelings such as "Future ages will scarcely believe that the hardiness of one man adventured, within the short compass of twelve years only...". Without Jefferson's personal take on things the piece became more of a political piece rather than one mans desire.
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