Self - Reflection

Included are four pieces of writing I have done this semester, my first year of academy. I feel they are my best pieces I have ever done in English language and represent the quality of my work as a whole. They consist of:
A letter for Cousin Harry
A memoir: my young dream
A film review: "Bowling for Columbine" by Michael Moore
A proposal research for cafeteria
My first piece is my "unsatisfying" piece. It is the letter I did for Cousin Harry. The reason for my dissatisfaction is I felt my story wasn't presented very well. Also, I felt my paper didn't have a real strong thesis or writer…